Education,  Writing

Why bother?

“When we reflect that ‘sentence’ means, literally, ‘a way of thinking’ (Latin: sententia) and that it comes from the Latin sentire, to feel, we realize that the concepts of sentence and sentence structure are not merely grammatical or merely academic — not negligible in any sense. A sentence is both the opportunity and the limit of thought — what we have to think with, and what we have to think in. It is, moreover, a feelable thought, a thought that impresses its sense not just on our understanding, but on our hearing, our sense of rhythm and proportion. It is a pattern of felt sense.” (Wendell Berry, “Standing by Words,” emphasis added)

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My eighth grader was asking me last week if I ever thought about whether it was a compound, mixed, or compound-complex sentence that I was writing, and whether I then wrote it down with attention to every phrase and sentence part — adjective, noun, direct object, etc. Brilliant teacher that I am, I extracted the pith of her question: “What’s the point of sentence diagramming?”

She is doomed to diagram sentences, because we use Rod and Staff English. And what she does at the eighth grade level is pretty challenging. I myself only had to practice sentence diagramming twice in all my years of education: in eighth grade, and in a graduate linguistics course. She has been doing it steadily for years now.

Her question is common enough. I have a feeling the only place sentence diagramming is still done (occasionally) is among homeschoolers, and not by all of them. No one seems to like it. (Except geeks like myself, for whom it’s kind of like putting together a puzzle.) And no one seems to know why we should bother with it.

I’m not altogether sure myself. What I told my eighth grader is that it’s like working with legos. Once you learn the different kinds of building blocks, you can put them together to create anything you want without having to think about it. You just reach for what you need, and you know what looks right, and you know how to structure something that will do what it’s supposed to do.

But today I stumbled upon this wonderful definition of a sentence in Wendell Berry’s 1979 essay “Standing by Words.” As is usually the case, he lays his hand with precision and elegance on the heart of the matter. Probably no one thinks in terms of grammatical labels when they build sentences, but they’re helpful in understanding how sentences work — and sentences provide the opportunities and limits through which we can connect with the world outside ourselves. A little tedium is a small price to pay in learning to use them well.

Think she’ll buy it? Her first response was, “I can think without sentences.” But try coming up with an actual thought without a sentence…

 

4 Comments

  • Bekahcubed

    I am one of those nerds who finds sentence diagramming like a fascinating puzzle, but I can understand the frustration others often have with diagramming. I can’t say I’ve ever consciously diagrammed my own sentences to make myself a better writer – but I have certainly spent hours diagramming the Apostle Paul to make myself a better student of Scripture.

  • Ruth

    I love the Berry quote. I don’t diagram sentences with my students, but I do think your daughter is probably benefiting from it. I think that understanding how the elements of language work together is useful. I mostly learned it from studying foreign languages rather than in English class.

  • Janet

    Good point. I think studying another language enhanced my understanding of English, too.

    I’ve joked about assigning one of Dickens’ endless sentences if she complains too much — maybe from ‘Great Expectations.’ :-) But some of Paul’s sentences would be pretty challenging to map too!

  • Amy @ Hope Is the Word

    I diagrammed a wee bit in high school, and then again an entire semester of diagramming in a grammar class in college. Our sentences DID come from the KJV and Shakespeare! Whew! Like Bekah, though, I mostly enjoyed it. :-)

    We started using R & S this year and are enjoying it!